from the outside

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Colombian Coke (Veteran Zoner) on Wednesday, 28-Jun-2006 16:45:10

From the outside, based on the book _harry Potter and the half blood prince
I stand outside the false happiness of the world
I wonder how much more pain my heart and soul can take
I feel trapp inside my own desires
I want to find peace in the midst of this cruel, senceless war
I taste blood
From the outside I watch the world run its unwinding cource
With thier own happiness and sadness
I wonder when I could ever be part of the world that used to be mine
I wonder when I will be normal once again
I walk through the darkness
Seeking the unseakable
And wondering if my heeart's desire will ever be fulfilled
Oh freinds, brothers, dead loved ones, can you hear my cries?
Can you hear all I hold inside?
Oh loved ones, take me away
And hold once again in your loving powerful arms.

Post 2 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Wednesday, 28-Jun-2006 23:03:19

...reminds me of deep feelings within when going by a home, knowing loved ones are gathered and sharing in merriment...knowing this and somehow not entering into this warmth of where deep care and concern and love abides...on the outside when night is entering into deepest night, travelling on chilled within and ....longing

Post 3 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Thursday, 29-Jun-2006 4:04:14

This is really sad. I think we've all felt this way before, I know I have. There's a lot of thought in this poem.

Post 4 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 29-Jun-2006 7:36:13

That is too close to the bone and heartfelt..thank you

Post 5 by lalady (This site is so "educational") on Thursday, 29-Jun-2006 19:41:07

Thanks. I feel....I understand...peace.

Post 6 by Colombian Coke (Veteran Zoner) on Tuesday, 01-Aug-2006 20:56:26

thanks for posting